Can you see me?
Standing in the doorway
Scratching at this façade you’ve created
You sealed me up
shut me out
Standing alone
here in the cold
Please understand, and…
give me your hand
You don’t have to fight on your own
Break down your walls
Let everything out
set it free
Forgive yourself
Forgive me
A purgatory experience
so riveting
Can you see me?
Feel me?
I wont let you die alone
Don’t let me die alone.
Why…
Can’t you…
See…
Me…
Can’t see.
©2008-2009 ~Razyle
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Another poem^^ much less graphic, and a fairly clear message. Hope you enjoy^^
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D: i wont let 'em die alone!
lol awesome, as always
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You hear about the skeleton who couldn't go to the party? He had noBODY to go with.
Oh that's not a fair test,
that joke's .: hilarious :.
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For if it is true that in essence the tragic hero is intent upon claiming his whole due as a personality, and if this struggle must be total and without reservation, then it automatically demonstrates the indestructible will of man to achieve his humanity
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